Should they increase the minimum wage of your father? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think they should increase the minimum wage of my father. Because if my father get lots of money I can eat lots of things that I want to eat. And, also my parents will give me more pocket money and I can buy the thinds that I want to buy. Maybe we can move to more big and more nice house. this reasons are why I think my father should get more minimum wage. Thank you for reading my presentation.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ella! Thank you for doing your homework tonight! I was smiling when I was reading it. Keep up the good work.
Until the next one! :)
See you in class!
~Teacher Sheila
>>I think, they should increase the minimum wage of my father.
Because if my father get lots of money I can eat lots of things that I want to eat.
>>Because if my father gets lot of money, I can eat lots of things that I want to eat.
And, also my parents will give me more pocket money and I can buy the thinds that I want to buy.
>>And also, my parents will give me more pocket money and I can buy the things that I want to buy.
Maybe we can move to more big and more nice house.
>>Maybe, we can move to a more bigger and more nicer house.
this reasons are why I think my father should get more minimum wage.
>>These are the reasons why I think my father should get more minimum wage.
OR>>These are the reasons why I think my father\'s minimum wage should increase.
Thank you for reading my presentation.
>>CORRECT
I feel great reading it. Thank you. ^-^
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