Should vaccines be made mandatory or should it be optional? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think vaccines should be optional. It\'s because today\'s Covid 19 pandemic\'s vaccine is made. But some people didn\'t get shot of vaccine because some people got side effects. And now Covid 19\'s vaccine shot is optional to people. I think it doesn\'t have to be mandatory about got vaccines.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy. ^_^
Thank you for answering this question.
Although the side effects of vaccines can be dangerous, I think the benefit that we get from them is far more beneficial.
Thank you for answering this question.
Although the side effects of vaccines can be dangerous, I think the benefit that we get from them is far more beneficial.
It\'s because vaccines provide us immunity from different diseases and help us recover faster from them.
However, people should take a lot of precaution when having them and should immediately see a doctor when they get adverse reactions.
However, people should take a lot of precaution when having them and should immediately see a doctor when they get adverse reactions.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day. ^^
See you in class later. :)
~Teacher Charry
See you in class later. :)
~Teacher Charry
>> CORRECT!
It\'s because today\'s Covid 19 pandemic\'s vaccine is made. But some people didn\'t get shot of vaccine because some people got side effects.
>> Some people didn\'t get the vaccine for CoVid19 because numerous people got side effects from the shot.
And now Covid 19\'s vaccine shot is optional to people.
>> So now, the vaccine for CoVid19 is optional to people.
I think it doesn\'t have to be mandatory about got vaccines.
>> I think getting vaccines doesn\'t have to be mandatory.
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