Should we admire heroes but not celebrities?

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I think we admire heroes but not celebrities.
>>> Correct! [I think we should admire heroes but not celebrities.]

Because, heroes are not forever.

>>> It\'s because heroes did great things.

But celebrities are almost forever except they done illegal things.
>>> But celebrities are great because they are famous.

For example, we all respect Audrey Hepburn because she is beautiful as well as she touch the world to help poor people.

>>> For example, we all respect Audrey Hepburn not just because she was beautiful but also she touched the world by helping poor people.

If she was not a celebrity, we would have not so much affected by her.

>>> It is true that if she was not a celebrity, we wouldn\'t have been so much affected by her.

Since she are celebrity, she could be a hero.

>>> However, due to her heroic acts, she became more famous and that she could be considered as a hero.

We fascinated to see hero in real world, but that is just some kind of \"fashion\".

>>> We are fascinated to see a hero in the real world, but that is just like some kind of a trend.

After time goes by, we totally forget about heroes in real life.

>>> Correct!

However we are never forget about celebrity.

>>> However, we never forget about celebrities.

They are always on news.

>>> They are always on the news.

They are able to lead and change our real world.

>>> Correct! 

So we admire heroes but not celebrities.

>>> Correct!