Should we always tell the truth? Why or why not?

2018-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I think, We don't need to always tell the truth. It's because, Using directly words make people angry. To be specific, we don't want to be intentional. But the words that we use will make sommeone misunderstand. We don't need to make relationship worse. and Moreover, Ii is helpful not to talk each other occasinally. For example, In a relationship with someone boyfriend, Not talking to his drawback doesn't make a fight. For these reasons, I think we don't need to always tell the truth.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Bella! ^_^

Thank you for diligently doing your homework.

I\'m happy because your essays are getting longer.

I encourage you to write more because this will help you with your essay writing in your IELTS.

I hope you\'re doing great.

Please don\'t feel too bad about tonight\'s class.

You can do better next time. Let\'s continue working together.
We can do it! ^^
See you on Wednesday.

~Teacher Charry

I think, We don\'t need to always tell the truth.

>> I think, we don\'t need to always tell the truth.

It\'s because, Using directly words make people angry.

>> It\'s because, directly using words make people angry.
To be specific, we don\'t want to be intentional.

>> CORRECT!

But the words that we use will make sommeone misunderstand.

>> But the words that we use will make someone misunderstand.

We don\'t need to make relationship worse.

>> We don\'t need to make a/the relationship worse.
and Moreover, Ii is helpful not to talk each other occasinally.

>> Moreover, it is helpful not to talk to each other occasionally.
For example, In a relationship with someone boyfriend, Not talking to his drawback doesn\'t make a fight.

>> For example in a relationship with a guy, not talking about his drawback doesn\'t make a fight. 

For these reasons, I think we don\'t need to always tell the truth.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Because of these reasons, I don\'t think it is always necessary to tell the truth.

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