Should we always tell the truth? Why or why not?
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I think, We don\'t need to always tell the truth.
>> I think, we don\'t need to always tell the truth.
It\'s because, Using directly words make people angry.
>> It\'s because, directly using words make people angry.
To be specific, we don\'t want to be intentional.
>> CORRECT!
But the words that we use will make sommeone misunderstand.
>> But the words that we use will make someone misunderstand.
We don\'t need to make relationship worse.
>> We don\'t need to make a/the relationship worse.
and Moreover, Ii is helpful not to talk each other occasinally.
>> Moreover, it is helpful not to talk to each other occasionally.
For example, In a relationship with someone boyfriend, Not talking to his drawback doesn\'t make a fight.
>> For example in a relationship with a guy, not talking about his drawback doesn\'t make a fight.
For these reasons, I think we don\'t need to always tell the truth.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Because of these reasons, I don\'t think it is always necessary to tell the truth.
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