Should we always think before we speak?
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I think we should always think before we speak.
>> CORRECT!
First of all, we can lose our point when we speak off the cuff.
>> CORRECT!
What I mean is that, if I don\'t think about what I want to talk enpugh, I can\'t speak logically.
>> What I mean is that, if I don\'t think about what I want to say enough, I can\'t speak logically.
Then fianlly nobody knows what I wanted to speak(even me!) and listners would think they wasted their time.
>> Then finally, nobody, even I, knows what I wanted to speak of and listners would think they wasted their time.
Therefore, conclusion of the speaking can dissappear.
>> Therefore, the conclusion of the speech can disappear.
Also, I can hurt someone.
>> CORRECT!
For example, when I argue with someone, or scold someone, if I speak according to what I think, I can take a mistake.
>> For example, when I argue with someone, or scold someone, if I speak according to what I think, I can make a mistake.
Because it is possible for me to speak emontionally.
>> It\'s because it is possible for me to speak emotionally.
Emotional conversation goes worse often and hurts the opposite easily.
>> An emotional conversation goes worse often and hurts the opposite party easily.
For these reasons,I think we should always think before we speak.
>> CORRECT!
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