Should we change our personality for other people to accept us?
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I have to think about how the other person would feel when I do this. Individuals can have different personalities.That\'s why we have to think about each other.I think the other person respects my personality and I should think about the other person\'s position.
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Should we change our personality for other people to accept us?
I have to think about how the other person would feel when I do this.
>>> CORRECT
OR: I have to think about how the other person would feel when I do something.
Individuals can have different personalities.
>>> CORRECT
That\'s why we have to think about each other.
>>> CORRECT
I think the other person respects my personality and I should think about the other person\'s position.
>>> If the other person respects my personality then I should think about the other person\'s position too.
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