Should we preserve old traditional houses and architecture? Why?

2018-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

I support to keep traditional houses. because When i see the korean TV programs that foreigners visited korea to tour with their friends. At that time foreigners reserved traditional house, They were interested in different experience. by keeping traditional culture, It lead to increase a tourist revenue. And, If they see the traditional construction, they could understand why koreans has a different culture and courtesy in comparision with western contries. It will be an effective way to advertise korea culture world wide. I ponder that If foreginers know why the korea has a the different culture and contruction, they will make an effort understand unfamiliar cultures.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. I would have to agree with you on this one. These traditional structures tell so much about a country\'s history and culture. Therefore, preserving them is significant.  

- T. Beth

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I support to keep traditional houses. because When i see the korean TV programs that foreigners visited korea to tour with their friends. At that time foreigners reserved traditional house,

>>>> I support preserving traditional houses. Whenever I watch Korean TV programs where foreigners visit Korea to tour with friends, at that time they book traditional houses.      

They were interested in different experience.

>>>> They were interested in a different experience.    

by keeping traditional culture, It lead to increase a tourist revenue.

>>>> By keeping traditional culture, it could lead to increase tourist venues.     

And, If they see the traditional construction, they could understand why koreans has a different culture and courtesy in comparision with western contries.

>>>>  In addition, if they see the traditional architecture, they could understand why koreans has a different culture and courtesy in comparision with western countries.   

It will be an effective way to advertise korea culture world wide. 

>>>> It would be an effective way to advertise Korean culture world wide.      
 I ponder that If foreginers know why the korea has a the different culture and contruction, they will make an effort understand unfamiliar cultures.

 >>>> I ponder about foreigners making an effort to understand the unfamiliar culture if they know why Korea has a different culture and architecture.   

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