Should we preserve old traditional houses and architecture? Why?
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Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. I would have to agree with you on this one. These traditional structures tell so much about a country\'s history and culture. Therefore, preserving them is significant.
- T. Beth
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I support to keep traditional houses. because When i see the korean TV programs that foreigners visited korea to tour with their friends. At that time foreigners reserved traditional house,
>>>> I support preserving traditional houses. Whenever I watch Korean TV programs where foreigners visit Korea to tour with friends, at that time they book traditional houses.
They were interested in different experience.
>>>> They were interested in a different experience.
by keeping traditional culture, It lead to increase a tourist revenue.
>>>> By keeping traditional culture, it could lead to increase tourist venues.
And, If they see the traditional construction, they could understand why koreans has a different culture and courtesy in comparision with western contries.
>>>> In addition, if they see the traditional architecture, they could understand why koreans has a different culture and courtesy in comparision with western countries.
It will be an effective way to advertise korea culture world wide.
>>>> It would be an effective way to advertise Korean culture world wide.
I ponder that If foreginers know why the korea has a the different culture and contruction, they will make an effort understand unfamiliar cultures.
>>>> I ponder about foreigners making an effort to understand the unfamiliar culture if they know why Korea has a different culture and architecture.
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