Should we preserve the traditions and practices during big holidays? Why or why not? If one ethnic
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If one ethnic group would lose all traditions, it is same as lose identity of ethnic group.
Korean\'s life have been becoming more western.
In terms of culture, it is a cultural absorption.
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If one ethnic group would lose all traditions, it is same as lose identity of ethnic group.
>> If an ethnic group were to lose all of its traditions, it would be the same as losing its identity.
Korean\'s life have been becoming more western.
>> Korean life has been becoming more Westernized.
In terms of culture, it is a cultural absorption.
>> In terms of culture, this is a form of cultural absorption.
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