Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations?

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>> Before I get started, I will exchange the word \'nation\' into \'state\'. [I will change the word \'nation\' to \'state\'

In my major, the term \'nation\' include concept of ethnics and nationality, but the term \'state\' only concentrates on sovereign power and it\'s rather close to modern concept of nation.

>> Correct

 Anyway it\'s obvious that wealthy states must share their properties for poor states.

>> Anyway, it\'s obvious that wealthy states must share their wealth to poor states.

Let me simply give some explanation for you why wealthy states called \'Great Power\' are responsible for poor states.

>> Let me simply give some explanation why wealthy states called \'Great Power\' are responsible for poor states.

 During the past world wars, killing innocent people and being brutal and severe, great powers exploited third world and take its laborer forces and natural resources.

>> Correct

Furthermore, under the great power\'s control, huge violations swept over their colonies.

>> Correct

 Independent activists got turtured and sexual criminals used to happen in the colonies.

>> Correct >> tortured

Great powers must reward their experiences and serious loss of human and natural resources.

>> Great powers must have been rewarded with their experiences and serious loss of human lives and natural resources.

They also stole lots of cultural heritages.
>> Correct 

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>>> They also stole numerous cultural heritages.
 On friday, I will prepare more and express out activly.
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