Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations? Why or why not?

2018-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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I think It's only fair to do that wealthy nations must share their wealth among poorer nations. In this wolrd where we are standing is not anyone's properties. It's for all of us. If my country is more rich than some other country, there's nothing to proud. I just lucky. On the contrary, If I were a citizen of poor country It's not my fault. So I thing wealthy people should help poor people.Among nations should to that too.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Jane!

I do ag[이름] with you.

Wealthy nations should help the poor nations.

I think it would be better to share their blessings.

Thank you for this wonderful answer.

_Teacher Dianne ^^

I think It\'s only fair to do that wealthy nations must share their wealth among poorer nations.

>> I think It\'s only fair to do that. Wealthy nations must share their wealth among poorer nations.
In this wolrd where we are standing is not anyone\'s properties.

>> In this world, where we are standing is not anyone\'s property.
It\'s for all of us.

>> correct
If my country is more rich than some other country, there\'s nothing to proud. I just lucky.

>> If my country is richer than some other countries, there\'s nothing to be proud of. I\'m just lucky.
On the contrary, If I were a citizen of poor country It\'s not my fault.
>> On the contrary, If I were a citizen of a poor country then it\'s not my fault.
So I thing wealthy people should help poor people.Among nations should to that too.

>> So I think wealthy people should help the poor people. Wealthy nations should to that too.

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