Should you always do sports?

2022-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

Yes,I do. I \'m doing yoga and badminton. Not always,but I\'m doing yoga is every Monday, Wednesday and Friday,and badminton is every Saturday.But I want to learn about swimming, because I like exercising in the water.

강사 첨삭

Hi Daisy!

I am glad that you were able to figure out some changes on how to write your homework :)

Enjoy studying English because I enjoy teaching you. Please check the changes on your sentences especially on punctguations :)
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T. Aki~

Yes,I do. I \'m doing yoga and badminton.

>>> Yes I do, I\'m doing yoga and badminton

Not always,but I\'m doing yoga is every Monday, Wednesday and Friday,and badminton is every Saturday.

>>> But I don\'t do it every day. I do Yoga on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays while I play badminton every Saturday.

But I want to learn about swimming, because I like exercising in the water.

>>> But I want to learn more about swimming because I like exercising in the water.

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