Should you always smile when you greet an adult? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Should you always smile when you greet an adult? Why?
Yes, I did.
I think we should always smile when we greet an adult, because I’m korean.
And I’m getting older and older.
I considered that it was old thougts of seniors before.
However, I regard as it a kind of society rule and system what we should follow.
강사 첨삭
Yes, I did.
I think we should always smile when we greet an adult, because I’m korean.
And I’m getting older and older.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
I think we should always smile when we greet an adult, because I’m korean.
>> I think we should always smile when we greet an adult because I’m Korean
OR >> I believe we should always smile when greeting adults because I’m Korean.
And I’m getting older and older.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Also, I’m getting older and older.
I considered that it was old thougts of seniors before.
>> I used to think that these were old-fashioned ideas from seniors.
>> I used to think that these were old-fashioned ideas from seniors.
OR >>I once believed this was an old way of thinking.
However, I regard as it a kind of society rule and system what we should follow.
>> However, I now regard it as a kind of social rule and system that we should follow.
OR >> However, I now see it as an important social rule.
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