Should you be focused on today or tomorrow? Explain in 3-5 sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I THINK GASTON IS UGLY BECAUSE HE IS VERY MEAN AND UGLY.ANYWAY I THINK WE`LL HAVE TO FOCUS ON TODAY.BECAUSE WHEN WE THINK OF TOMMOROW THEN YOU CAN`T FOCUS ON WHAT YOUR DOING TODAY. AND I LIKE BUMBLEBEES.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Rosy!
Thank you for answering your homework and sending me a lot of pictures!
I hope you have a good night.
See you tomorrow ~
>>CORRECT
ANYWAY I THINK WE`LL HAVE TO FOCUS ON TODAY.
>>CORRECT
BECAUSE WHEN WE THINK OF TOMMOROW THEN YOU CAN`T FOCUS ON WHAT YOUR DOING TODAY.
>> If we think about tomorrow, then we can\'t focus on what we are doing today.
AND I LIKE BUMBLEBEES.
>> I like bumblebees.
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