Should you give your best on your first day of work in your company?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that should hard work no matter the first day of work in the company. But as much as the first day of work, I think that must follow the rules and adapt to the company. First of all, I believe that safety is a priority when you work.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Jay!
Good point! I agree that we need not to work hard on our first day because it might bring a bad impression on you. Other people might think that you are just showing on. What matters most is you do your job, follow the rules and go home after work- haha!
Have a great day!
T. Aki~
I think that should hard work no matter the first day of work in the company. >>> I think that I should not work hard even it is my first day in the company.
But as much as the first day of work, I think that must follow the rules and adapt to the company.
>>> But as much as the first day of work, I think that I must follow the rules and adapt to the company.
First of all, I believe that safety is a priority when you work.
>>> Besides, safety is the top priority when you work.
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