Should you tell your loved one that he/she is terminally ill?

2013-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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It is a bit serious issue to discuss whether or not you will tell your loved one that she/he has a terminal illness and eventually will die. Medical experts say that you let him/her know of his/her fatal condition in advance so that he/she can prepare for the rest of his/her remaining life even if his/her time remained is remarkably short. It sounds reasonable and makes sense perfectly. For some terminally patients, the grim news can be beneficial and help them prepare, but for others, the truth can be devastating. Personally, I think that I would not tell anything especially if he/she has to be in the hospital until his/her last moment.It would not be helpful at all for him/her to recover or to cure his/her illness. Rather, it would only make him/her feel frustrated and give up his/her life unless he/she is strong enough to confront his/her biggest challenge. If he/she could walk and do some activities for himself/herself out of the hospital, then I might consider reveling it.

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Hello Sir [이름]^^ Good afternoon! How was your day? It\'s Monday again. ^^ I hope that you had a fun weekend. I do agree with you! We must be careful in terms of telling our loved one about his condition. We should think about the pros and cons of telling him/her about the news. Your opinions are greatly appreciated and keep on writing! ^^ Don\'t give up! If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class.^^ Teacher Nina It is a bit serious issue to discuss whether or not you will tell your loved one that she/he has a terminal illness and eventually will die. >> It is a bit serious issue to discuss whether or not you will tell your loved one that she/he has a terminal illness and will eventually die. Medical experts say that you let him/her know of his/her fatal condition in advance so that he/she can prepare for the rest of his/her remaining life even if his/her time remained is remarkably short. >> Medical experts say that you should let him/her know of his/her fatal condition in advance so that he/she can prepare for the rest of his/her remaining life even if his/her reamining time is remarkably short. It sounds reasonable and makes sense perfectly. >> It sounds reasonable and it perfectly makes sense. For some terminally patients, the grim news can be beneficial and help them prepare, but for others, the truth can be devastating. >> For some terminally ill patients, the grim news can be beneficial and help them prepare, but for others, the truth can be devastating. Personally, I think that I would not tell anything especially if he/she has to be in the hospital until his/her last moment. >> Correct! It would not be helpful at all for him/her to recover or to cure his/her illness. >> Correct! Rather, it would only make him/her feel frustrated and give up his/her life unless he/she is strong enough to confront his/her biggest challenge. >> Correct! If he/she could walk and do some activities for himself/herself out of the hospital, then I might consider reveling it. >> Correct! (Spelling check: revealing ) >> OR: If he/she could walk and do some activities for himself/herself out of the hospital, then I might consider telling him about his condition.

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