Should younger generations continue ancestor rituals? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
As time goes by, traditions is going to be changed and renewed.
So, I don\'t think it\'s fair to force younger generations to perform the traditional way\'s ancestor rituals.
But if they want to do, it can be kept as not only original version but also the newly method.
What I want to say is that it\'s important to keep the tradition, but we have to know traditions are also changed and evolved.
강사 첨삭
As time goes by, traditions is going to be changed and renewed.
>> As time goes by, traditions are going to change and be renewed.
So, I don\'t think it\'s fair to force younger generations to perform the traditional way\'s ancestor rituals.
>> So, I don’t think it’s fair to force younger generations to perform ancestor rituals in the traditional way.
>> So, I don’t think it’s fair to force younger generations to perform ancestor rituals in the traditional way.
But if they want to do, it can be kept as not only original version but also the newly method.
>> But if they want to, the tradition can be kept in both its original form and a newer version.
>> But if they want to, the tradition can be kept in both its original form and a newer version.
What I want to say is that it\'s important to keep the tradition, but we have to know traditions are also changed and evolved.
>> What I mean is that it’s important to keep traditions, but we must also recognize that they change and evolve.
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