Should younger generations continue ancestor rituals? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think ritual is good customs. However, its method gone bad.
It need too much preparation such as many foods, so many people don\'t like anymore.
I believe that ritual should be kept continuously.
But, it should be reduced preparations of a ritual.
강사 첨삭
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I think ritual is good customs. However, its method gone bad.
>> I think rituals are good customs, but their methods have become excessive.
It need too much preparation such as many foods, so many people don\'t like anymore.
>> They require too much preparation, such as preparing a lot of food, so many people don’t like them anymore.
I believe that ritual should be kept continuously.
But, it should be reduced preparations of a ritual.
>> I believe rituals should still be preserved, but the amount of preparation involved should be reduced.
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