shoulder ache
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My shoulders have neen ached for several years. I didn't sleep well and sit up at night. If I studied and worked with my head lookin down, I felt my shoulder felt like twistering and had a sharp pain in the back of my head.So I have tried to releve my pain in diverse ways. First, I went to the oriental medical clinic. I got an acupuncture on part betwwen collarbone and shoulder. it string a little. I'm afraid of it. But it's better than being in a pain. and then I was appied cupping treatment and got rid of bad blood which didn't circulate in my body. and then I got a moxa. It helps circulation.
Second thing is taking Chuna treatment. I lain down on a specail bed and docotor pressed ny body instaneously. Third is massage.
Professor press smoothly according to blood vessel using aroma oil.
It made me feel eased. It seemed that she touch my lymph and cells.
But it's too expensive for me I can't afford to it.
Nowadays I worked out at the gym to make my muscles thicker.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I\'m so sorry to hear that you are experiencing pain like that.
I can\'t imagine myself being in such pain for 6 years.
I will pray for you and I hope you\'ll take care of yourself.^^
See you again tomorrow.. :)
--- T. Anne
My shoulders have neen ached for several years.
>> My shoulders have been aching for several years.
I didn\'t sleep well and sit up at night.
>> Correct!
If I studied and worked with my head lookin down, I felt my shoulder felt like twistering and had a sharp pain in the back of my head.
>> If I studied and worked with my head lookin down, I felt like my shoulder is twisting and I had a sharp pain in the back of my head.
So I have tried to releve my pain in diverse ways.
>> So I have to relieve my pain in several ways.
First, I went to the oriental medical clinic.
>> Correct!
I got an acupuncture on part betwwen collarbone and shoulder.
>> I got an acupuncture betwwen my collarbone and my shoulder.
it string a little.
>> It sting a little.
I\'m afraid of it.
>> Correct!
But it\'s better than being in a pain.
>> Correct!
and then I was appied cupping treatment and got rid of bad blood which didn\'t circulate in my body.
>> And then I undergone cupping treatment and got rid of bad blood which didn\'t circulate in my body.
and then I got a moxa.
>> And then I had moxa.
It helps circulation.
>> It helps on the circulation.Second thing is taking Chuna treatment.
>> Correct!
I lain down on a specail bed and docotor pressed ny body instaneously.
>> I lain down on a special bed and the doctor pressed my body continuously.
Third is massage.
>> Correct!Professor press smoothly according to blood vessel using aroma oil.>> The professor pressed smoothly according to blood vessel using aroma oil.It made me feel eased.
>> Correct!
It seemed that she touch my lymph and cells.
>> It seemed that she touch my lymph and cells.But it\'s too expensive for me I can\'t afford to it.
>> But it\'s too expensive for me that I can\'t afford to it.Nowadays I worked out at the gym to make my muscles thicker.
>> Correct!
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