show you my confidence.
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Hello [이름] [이름],
It\'s amazing to see how much you\'ve grown, and your journey is truly inspiring! You\'ve come so far from being a passive girl to someone who\'s ready to take on challenges and pursue what they want. It takes a lot of courage to step out of your comfort zone, and you\'re doing just that!
Having no confidence in the past, I can tell that you\'re now building it step by step, even if things don\'t always go as planned. Remember, learning is a process. Every mistake, every loss, and every challenge you face is part of your growth. Whether it\'s English, badminton, or your computer studies, you are pushing yourself forward, and that\'s what matters most.
The key is to keep going. Even when it\'s slow, even when things don’t seem perfect, you\'re making progress. And that\'s worth celebrating. You\'re setting a great example for others to show them that with determination, they too can find their confidence and try new things.
Your message to \"try everything you want to do, even if you regret it\" is a powerful one. Never stop believing in yourself, because the confidence you\'re building now will take you even further in life. Keep pushing, and remember that I\'m always rooting for you. You\'ve got this!
~Teacher Cathy
I want to give them a big confidence.
>>I want to show them that I\'m very confident.
I was no confidence and passive girl in the old days.
>>I was a girl with no confidence and was passive in the past.
I didn\\\'t know what do I want to do and just copied everything the other people behavior.
>>I didn’t know what I wanted to do and just copied everyone else\'s behavior.
I have something I want to do but I can\\\'t because I have no confidence.
>>I had something I wanted to do, but I couldn\'t because I didn\'t have confidence.
Now, I want to try something I want to do , even if I regret it.
>>Now, I want to try something I’ve always wanted to do, even if I regret it.
even if slow learn, lose badminton game and no have time, steadily study English, lesson badminton and go a computer academy for getting a computer license.
>>Even if learning is slow, I lose badminton games, and I don\'t have much time, I will steadily study English, take badminton lessons, and attend a computer academy to earn a computer license.
So I say, \"try everythig you wnat to do, even if regret it\"
>>So I say, \"Try everything you want to do, even if you might regret it.\"
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