Shy !! help me^^

2009-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

학생이 쓴 원문

I wonder, If you use the word 'internet shopping'. In korea, many people buy something by internet. We call doing this 'Internet shopping' But I am not sure this is right word. And I wonder, If another country people buy something by internet too. P.S : I am happy and nice our class everyday. I hated english. But now, I enjoy english and I am waitting for our class. Thank you!!

강사 첨삭

hi andrea!!   thank you for enjoying our class. i also enjoy our class and i love talking to you..anyway, the right word is "online shopping" and yes, online shopping is also very popular in other countries..i also have corrections in your composition..^^     I wonder, If you use the word 'internet shopping'. >>I wonder if the right word to use is "internet shopping" In korea, many people buy something by internet. >>In Korea, many people buy things through the internet We call doing this 'Internet shopping' >>We call this "internet shopping". But I am not sure this is right word. >>But I am not sure if it뭩 the correct word. And I wonder, If another country people buy something by internet too. >>And I wonder if people from other countries buy something through the internet, too.     have a nice day!!! ^^    

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·