Shy !! help me^^
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I wonder, If you use the word 'internet shopping'.
In korea, many people buy something by internet.
We call doing this 'Internet shopping'
But I am not sure this is right word.
And I wonder, If another country people buy something by internet too.
P.S : I am happy and nice our class everyday.
I hated english. But now, I enjoy english and I am waitting
for our class. Thank you!!
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hi andrea!!
thank you for enjoying our class. i also enjoy our class and i love talking to you..anyway, the right word is "online shopping" and yes, online shopping is also very popular in other countries..i also have corrections in your composition..^^
I wonder, If you use the word 'internet shopping'.
>>I wonder if the right word to use is "internet shopping"
In korea, many people buy something by internet.
>>In Korea, many people buy things through the internet
We call doing this 'Internet shopping'
>>We call this "internet shopping".
But I am not sure this is right word.
>>But I am not sure if it뭩 the correct word.
And I wonder, If another country people buy something by internet too.
>>And I wonder if people from other countries buy something through the internet, too.
have a nice day!!! ^^
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