Sick
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [OPINION] Why do you think people get sick?
I think reason why people get sick is don\'t care personal hygiene.
Like do not wash hand after going to bathroom and not keeping cough etiquette.
I think caring about personal hygiene is the most important.
Corona virus is in vogue, so I hope you can better protect your personal hygiene.
강사 첨삭
Happy Tuesday, [이름]!
(^_^)//
Thank you for answering your homework.
However, I have made some modifications.
When we in vogue, it means fashionable or stylish. I just thought it\'s not the appropriate term to describe Covid-19.
We can talk about this tomorrow if you want to.^^
Have a good night!
__Teacher Mayleen :)
I think reason why people get sick is don\'t care personal hygiene.
>>> I think reason why people get sick is improper personal hygiene.
Like do not wash hand after going to bathroom and not keeping cough etiquette.
>>> For example, people do not wash hands after going to the bathroom and not keeping cough etiquette.
I think caring about personal hygiene is the most important.
>>> I think caring for one\'s personal hygiene is the most important.
Corona virus is in vogue, so I hope you can better protect your personal hygiene.>>> Coronavirus is prevalent, so I hope you can protect yourself better by practicing proper hygiene.
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