Sick!

2012-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Meg

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I was sick.... I drank sour milk at school!! So,I suffer from a stomachache!! And than, I left school during school hours.. I can't ate any food... because, when I ate any food, i was vomiting violently!! But today!! I get well now!! And no just yet, I should careful what I put into my body~^^

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday! =) I\'m very sad to hear that you\'re sick. Please be careful with what you eat. It\'s really difficult to be sick nowadays. Thank you for doing your homework my dear! Here are the necessary corrections to your homework. Read and analyze it. Apply it to suitable situations in the future. Take care and have a nice day. ~Teacher Meg I was sick.... >>CORRECT!I drank sour milk at school!! >>CORRECT!So,I suffered from a stomachache!! >>That\'s the reason why I suffered from a terrible stomach ache!And than, I left school during school hours.. >>Then, I left school during school hours.I can\'t ate any food... because, when I ate any food, i was vomiting violently!! >>I caouldn\'t eat any food because I vomit violently whenever I eat anything!But today!! I get well now!! >>But today, I will get well now!!!And no just yet, I should careful what I put into my body~^^ >>Furthermore, I should be more careful with what I ingest.^^

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