sickening person

2020-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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There are many kinds of people in the world. For example, talkative people, easily angry people, negative people, selfish people, and so on. I personally seem to get fed up with people who don\'t understand someone else\'s position and who only make their own claims. I think because they only put their arguments forward, no one can talk to them. If I meet them, I want to run away very far

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] ha!
This is really good work.
I\'m glad you were able to get your groove back.
Congratulations!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
There are many kinds of people in the world.
>> Correct
For example, talkative people, easily angry people, negative people, selfish people, and so on.
>> For example, there are talkative people, people with bad temper, negative people, selfish people, and so on.
I personally seem to get fed up with people who don\'t understand someone else\'s position and who only make their own claims.
>> Correct
I think because they only put their arguments forward, no one can talk to them.
>> I think it\'s because they only put their arguments forward and no one can talk to them.
If I meet them, I want to run away very far
>> If I meet them, I want to run away very far away from them. 

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