sign of aging
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I can easily find sign of aging when I get some weight. I can not eat much more than before but I have gotten some weight. I am into running, so even I run 2-3 times a week I have gotten some weight. I have to try harder training for constant my body.
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Good evening, Thomas! It is wonderful to see you here on the composition page.
I totally agree that at the age of 30\'s, getting rid of calories is such a difficult thing to achieve. Hence, we have to be very mindful of our food intake as well as the increased number of physical activities we engage in.
Below, I read a very well-written homework answer. Your writing demonstrates very good syntax (arrangement of words) as well as diction (correct choice of words) to create a systematic and logical idea. Please go over some of my grammar suggestions and always keep them in mind. You have done excellent for this homework!
See you again in class tomorrow.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Or: I can easily find a sign of aging when I (get/ gain) some weight.
I can not eat much more than before but I have gotten some weight.
>> Correct!
I am into running, so even I run 2-3 times a week I have gotten some weight.
>> I am into running, so even if I run 2-3 times a week I have gotten some weight. Very good sentence!
I have to try harder training for constant my body.
>> Correct!
Or: I have to try harder training my body constantly.
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