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The personality of Hermione in Harry Potter series aligns with mine since she is a representative of logic, leadership and effectiveness.
>>Correct.
Even though, I have not fully watched Harry potter series, I often heard that my working style is similar with her.
>>Although I haven\'t fully watched the Harry Potter series, I often hear that my working style is similar to hers.
Because I tend to prioritize the options to do and handle by plans and rules, it would be embarrassed to me if the situation flow in unexpected way.
>>I prioritize options and handle tasks based on plans and rules, and I will be embarrassed if the situation flows in an unexpected way.
And also, she and I prefer to lead the people to one direction for enhancing the group performance.
>>Additionally, both Hermione and I prefer to lead people in one direction to enhance group performance.
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