simple but expensive
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you plan to prepare for your upcoming move to a new location?
>>> For selected internship members from other colleges, college where I will go prepares our domitary for a month period. So I will just bring my notebook and basic clothes. The other things for living will be there. Original internship period is started on [이름]e 24th but I have a exam that same day. The result that I contact with persons concerned with internship is just starting internship on [이름]e 25th. He said it will not be huge disadvantage. I will find new proper point where we will talk.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Brian!
It\'s great to hear that the college is preparing the dormitory for you. Hope you will have a great stay!
~ Teacher Maxine
>> For selected internship members from other colleges, the college where I will go prepares our dormitory for a month period. So, I will just bring my notebook and basic clothes.
The other things for living will be there.
>> The other necessities for living will be provided there.
Original internship period is started on [이름]e 24th but I have a exam that same day.
>> The original internship period starts on [이름]e 24th, but I have an exam that same day.
The result that I contact with persons concerned with internship is just starting internship on [이름]e 25th.
>> The result of my contact with persons concerned with the internship is that it will start on [이름]e 25th.
He said it will not be huge disadvantage.
>> He said it will not be a huge disadvantage.
I will find new proper point where we will talk.
>> I will find a new suitable point where we can talk.
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