Simple, but pretty~^^
학생이 쓴 원문
I want a comfortable and pretty school uniform. It doesn\'t matter if it suits me. Because school uniforms were made to suit everyone from the time they were originally made. First of all, I wish there is no big ribbon, and I wish it is simple but pretty. I wish it isn\'t there lace or too fancy material, and I think a skirt should be up in the knees, but if I want to fit well in this school uniform, I have to lose weight by dieting. To sum up, I want a comfortable and pretty school uniform, but for this pretty school uniform to fit well, I have to look back on myself...
강사 첨삭
Hello Maria!
I laughed a little bit when you said that you have to diet. ^^ Sometimes I feel that way too about many of my clothes. Anyway, your kind of uniform is familiar with me and I have seen that kind of style in other school\'s before. You are right, it is pretty and it suits you.
I am thankful for this composition that you have submitted. See you then tomorrow!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
It doesn\'t matter if it suits me. Because school uniforms were made to suit everyone from the time they were originally made.
>> Correct!
First of all, I wish there is no big ribbon, and I wish it is simple but pretty.
>> Correct!
I wish it isn\'t there lace or too fancy material, and I think a skirt should be up in the knees, but if I want to fit well in this school uniform, I have to lose weight by dieting.
>> I wish there isn\'t lace or too fancy material, and I think a skirt should be up in the knees. But if I want to fit well in this school uniform, I have to lose weight by dieting.
To sum up, I want a comfortable and pretty school uniform, but for this pretty school uniform to fit well, I have to look back on myself..
>> Correct!
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