simple day┏√守───━
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
So, I believe that you enjoy your day.
It is really good to know Mike.
I just hope that you will have a good day again tomorrow.
Enjoy, go out and play with your friends.
If not, just stay at home and study hard.
Have some fun dear.
-Teacher Chloe
I\'m not bad today.
>>Correct!
>>I am good today.
I\'m not bad because my feeling is good taday.
>>I am feeling good today.
I went to the academy with my friends.
>>Correct!
My friends and i go to the same school.
>>My friends and I go to the same school.
I go to school and i go to the academy.
>>I go to school and academy.
Today is very simple day to me.
>>Today was a very simple day to me.
I comes to my house at 9\'o clock.
>>I came home at nine o\'clock.
>>I came home at 9PM.
My sister comes to my house at 9:50 P.M.
>>My sister came home at 9:50PM.
Today was very simple day.
>>Today was my simplest day.
I will not go to my grandmother\'s house tomorrow.
>>Correct!
Have fun good bye~~
>>Correct!
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