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2014-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm not bad today. I'm not bad because my feeling is good taday. I went to the academy with my friends. My friends and i go to the same school. I go to school and i go to the academy. Today is very simple day to me. I comes to my house at 9'o clock. My sister comes to my house at 9:50 P.M. Today was very simple day. I will not go to my grandmother's house tomorrow. Have fun good bye~~

강사 첨삭

So, I believe that you enjoy your day.

It is really good to know Mike.

I just hope that you will have a good day again tomorrow.

Enjoy, go out and play with your friends.

If not, just stay at home and study hard.

Have some fun dear.

-Teacher Chloe

I\'m not bad today.

>>Correct!

>>I am good today.
I\'m not bad because my feeling is good taday.

>>I am feeling good today.
I went to the academy with my friends.

>>Correct!
My friends and i go to the same school.

>>My friends and I go to the same school.

I go to school and i go to the academy.

>>I go to school and academy.
Today is very simple day to me.

>>Today was a very simple day to me.
I comes to my house at 9\'o clock.

>>I came home at nine o\'clock.

>>I came home at 9PM.
My sister comes to my house at 9:50 P.M.

>>My sister came home at 9:50PM.
Today was very simple day.

>>Today was my simplest day.
I will not go to my grandmother\'s house tomorrow.

>>Correct!
Have fun good bye~~

>>Correct!

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