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I eat an apple every morning I drink one liter of water everyday. I don't go to my home from monday to friday. You smile when a man does joke. You don't smile if your friend does a sad story. Do you usually eat a rice? He drinks alcohol when new employee come. We smile when meet glad person. We go to the Kang-Won-Do to pray my wish at 8th May. We make an effort to talk strong point of others. We live each moment to take a star. They touch a statue displayed in the museum.

Hello Micheal! Thank you for sending me the sentences that you did for correction.I appreciate the effort in making your assignment.I hope that you would continue doing it for more improvement.Have a great weekend! -T.Bella- I eat an apple every morning >>I eat apple everyday.I drink one liter of water everyday. >>Correct I don't go to my home from monday to friday. >>I don't go home from Monday to Friday.You smile when a man does joke. >>I smile when a man jokes. >>I smile when someone jokes.You don't smile if your friend does a sad story. >>You don't smile if your friend shares a sad story. >>You don't smile if your friend tells a sad story.Do you usually eat a rice? >>Do you usually eat rice?He drinks alcohol when new employee come. >>He drinks alcohol when a new employee comes.We smile when meet glad person. >>We smile when we meet a glad person. >>We are happy when we meet a happy person. >>We smile back when a person smiles.We go to the Kang-Won-Do to pray my wish at 8th May. >>We will go to Kang-Won-Do to pray on the 8th of May. >>On the 8th of May,we will go to Kang-Won-do to pray.We make an effort to talk strong point of others. >>We make an effort to appreciate the strong points of others.We live each moment to take a star. >>CorrectThey touch a statue displayed in the museum. >> They touched the statue displayed in the museum.>>They touched the statue displayed in the museum.