Since it\'s Halloween season, do you think ghosts are real? Why or why not?

2021-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Since it\'s Halloween season, do you think ghosts are real? Why or why not? I have never seen a ghost. But It\'s like they exist somewhere. I will probably not see a ghost all my life. Listening to ghosts story, I will believe in their existence.

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Hi [이름]:)

Me too. I don\'t believe in ghosts but I am very much afraid of it. Hahaha!

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I have never seen a ghost.

>>CORRECT

But It\'s like they exist somewhere.

>> But it seems that they exist somewhere.

I will probably not see a ghost all my life.

>> I will probably not see a ghost in my entire life.

Listening to ghosts story, I will believe in their existence.
>> When I listen to ghost stories, it makes me believe in them.

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