Since the world is experiencing a pandemic now, what do you think would be the best thing to do this
학생이 쓴 원문
I really love doing outside activities so this pandemic makes me depressed. People have uploaded a lot of activities that everyone can try at home such as home training. However, I would like to play any kind of sports with people, I don\'t feel excited to do something alone. We are facing crisis that virus might spread around our country if we don\'t keep the social distance. That is really harsh for people and nobody know when this crisis will be ended. I think that all activities are bored when it is done alone. However, we can spend a lot of time with family these days. It will be the most valuable time for every family because Koreans can\'t spend time with family a lot due to too much work. Since a pandemic started, government encouraged business man to work at home if it is possible. We used to not to talk with family after work, we just have a dinner and then all family members do whatever they want to do. So if we use this time very well, we will make lovely family.
강사 첨삭
Good day Sir [이름]? How\'s your hairstyle doing? kk Kidding! Well, yes many people today are very eager to quench their social life. Me either, but as time goes by I get used to what I\'m doing regularly so I\'m fine. Have a great week~! ^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I really love doing outside activities so this pandemic makes me depressed.
>>> I really love doing outdoor activities so this pandemic makes me depressed.
People have uploaded a lot of activities that everyone can try at home such as home training.
>>> CORRECT
However, I would like to play any kind of sports with people, I don\'t feel excited to do something alone.
>>> CORRECT
We are facing crisis that virus might spread around our country if we don\'t keep the social distance.
>>> We are facing crisis in which the virus might spread around our country if we don\'t keep social distancing.
That is really harsh for people and nobody knows when this crisis will end.
>>> CORRECT
I think that all activities are boring when it is done alone.
>>> CORRECT
However, we can spend a lot of time with family these days.
>>> CORRECT
It will be the most valuable time for every family because Koreans can\'t spend time with their family a lot due to too much work.
>>> CORRECT
Since the pandemic started, government encouraged business man to work at home if it is possible.
>>> CORRECT
We used to not to talk with family after work, we just have a dinner and then all family members do whatever they want to do.
>>> We used not to talk with the family after work, we just have a dinner and then all family members do whatever they want to do.
So if we use this time very well, we will make a lovely family.
>>> CORRECT
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