Since we celebrated Chu Seok, what are you most thankful for?
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I am so thankful to my parents because they bought a new call phone for me.
Mine was little old design so I thought \'I really want to change my cell phone to new design\'.
But my parents didn\'t buy it for me, and I just own my cell phone until now.
And then, after Chu Seok, my parents bought a new cell phone for me.
So I think I am most thankful to my parents because of the new cell phone.
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Hi [이름]! :)
There are actually a lot of things to be thankful for in our lives but I think being healthy during this pandemic is the best one. Thanks for sharing yours as well. :)
I am so thankful to my parents because they bought a new call phone for me.
>> I am most thankful for my parents because they just bought me a new phone.
Mine was little old design so I thought \'I really want to change my cell phone to new design\'.
>> My old one is a little bit old so I have been wanting to have a new one.
But my parents didn\'t buy it for me, and I just own my cell phone until now.
>> By my parents didn\'t buy me one until today.
And then, after Chu Seok, my parents bought a new cell phone for me.
>> After Chu Seok, my parents bought a new cell phone for me.
So I think I am most thankful to my parents because of the new cell phone.
>> So I am most thankful for them because they bought me a new cellphone.
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