Singer Solbi takes college entrance exam.
학생이 쓴 원문
Solbi had secretly taken the college exam. In her diary she said some students recognized her during the examination and rised good luck. I think solbi had a great choice she greaduated a university in 2003 but anyway met a huge college and she did. I want solbi to graduate a university soon.
강사 첨삭
Hello Cindy!
Thanks for writing again. I wonder who Solbi is. I'll try to check her out if I have time. Talk to you tomorrow!
-RJ
Solbi had secretly taken the college exam.
>>correct
In her diary she said some students recognized her during the examination and rised good luck.
>>In her diary she said some students recognized her during the examination and wished good luck.
I think solbi had a great choice she greaduated a university in 2003 but anyway met a huge college and she did.
>>I think Solbi made a great choice. She graduated from a university in 2003 but anyway went to a huge college and she did it.
I want solbi to graduate a university soon.
>>I want Solbi to graduate from the university soon.>>correct
In her diary she said some students recognized her during the examination and rised good luck.
>>In her diary she said some students recognized her during the examination and wished good luck.
I think solbi had a great choice she greaduated a university in 2003 but anyway met a huge college and she did.
>>I think Solbi made a great choice. She graduated from a university in 2003 but anyway went to a huge college and she did it.
I want solbi to graduate a university soon.
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