sitting back-1
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Sitting back
A few weeks ago I found that sewage was licking from a crack of the brick fence into my garden, which stood between my house and the next doors. The licking water was increasing day by day, so I asked my husband to deal with it. also I visited my three next doors to tell them about it and asked to check their drain system. All of them didn’t show any consideration for it and were busy only to excuse as if it’s other’s fault but not theirs. I was really disappointed with their uncooperative attitude. Weeks passed as the foul water was increasing at the bottom of the fence. I was really under stress. No body paid attention about it, and even my husband seemed to sit back letting it be done. his attitude made me more stressful. - to be continued
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Hi Ms. [Name]!!
Good morning!!!
I am really sorry to hear about this problem. From what you told here, I think everyone else but you are busy to give much attention to this issue. I think they should pay attention with this because if it was not fixed sooner it might cause a bigger problem. Just relax Ms. [Name] and don't get yourself stressed. I hope that one of your neighbors will fix this as soon as possible. Cheer up Ms. [Name]
Lei :-)
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A few weeks ago I found that sewage was leaking from a crack of the brick fence into my garden,
A few weeks ago I found that sewage was leaking from a crack of the brick fence into my garden,
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which stood between my house and the next doors.
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The leaking water was increasing day by day, so I asked my husband to deal with it.
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>>The water leak is getting worse day after day, so I asked my husband to deal with it (better)
also I visited my three next doors to tell them about it and asked to check their drain system.
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All of them didn’t show any consideration and were busy only to make excuses as if it’s other’s fault but not theirs.
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I was really disappointed with their uncooperative attitude.
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Weeks passed as the foul water was increasing at the bottom of the fence.
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I was really under stress.
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Nobody paid attention about it, and even my husband seemed to sit back letting it be done.
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his attitude made me more stressful.
>>his attitude made me more stressed.
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