Situation of the acciddnt
학생이 쓴 원문
Let\'s suppose that a big acident was occured and I saw it.
First, call 119 first.
Second, See whether anyone was hurted.
Third, If there is anybody who is hurted, help him(her) by anyway what I can do.
Forth, Stay with injured person untill 119 arrives.
강사 첨삭
H[이름]!
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This is important so that you can make your point clear.
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It was very easy to follow.
Happy Friday!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Let\'s suppose that a big acident was occured and I saw it.
>> Let\'s suppose that a big accident occurred and I saw it.
First, call 119 first.
First, call 119 first.
>> First, call 119.
Second, See whether anyone was hurted.
Second, See whether anyone was hurted.
>> Second, check whether anyone was hurt.
Third, If there is anybody who is hurted, help him(her) by anyway what I can do.
>> Third, if there was somebody who was hurt, help him or her in any way that I can.
Forth, Stay with injured person untill 119 arrives.
Forth, Stay with injured person untill 119 arrives.
>> Fourth, stay with the injured person until help arrives.
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