Sixth homework

I think neighborhood where I live is safe although there are exceptions. The main reason that I think so doing is to have lived in continuously our village since I was born. in this village, I met many people and became intimate with them. As time goes by, I was known about them who are very good people. So, if I happen to undergo dangerous situation, They will help immediately me without hesitation. In this reasons, I think our neighborhood is safe to live in. But unfortunately, crimes are often committed in our area. For example, drunken people made a disturbance so innocent residents got hurt in their arms and legs because of them a few days ago. I hope that such accident never happens again everywhere.

Hi there [이름]!
Like you said, the good thing about living in the same place for a long time is that you know most of the people from your neighborhood. You know who you should be friends with and who you should avoid. You did great in your homework. keep it up!
~T. Lynn
I think neighborhood where I live is safe although there are exceptions.
>> I think the neighborhood where I live is safe although there are exceptions.
OR>> I think my neighborhood is safe although there are some exceptions.
 The main reason that I think so doing is to have lived in continuously our village since I was born.
>> The main reason that I think so is because I have been living in our village since I was born.
 In this village, I met many people and became intimate with them.
>> correct!
As time goes by, I was known about them who are very good people.
>> As time goes by, I\'ve known a few who are very good people.
So, if I happen to undergo dangerous situation, They will help immediately me without hesitation.
>> So, if I happen to undergo a dangerous situation, they will help immediately me without hesitation.
 In this reasons, I think our neighborhood is safe to live in.
>> For this reason, I think our neighborhood is safe to live in.
But unfortunately, crimes are often committed in our area.
>> correct!
For example, drunken people made a disturbance so innocent residents got hurt in their arms and legs because of them a few days ago.
>> For example, drunk people made a disturbance so innocent residents got hurt in their arms and legs because of them a few days ago.
I hope that such accident never happens again everywhere.
>> I hope that such accident/incident will never happen again everywhere.