Skating

Last week,I went to the Olympic park.I went skating for 4 hours. And they provided songs.In Friday, I skated alone.And next day I skated with my best friend Eric.He is not good as me but we enjoyed it.And the view of the night is very good.I recommend you to go to skate at night.Almost 6:30 to 8:30.

Hi [이름]!   Wow, you seem to have really enjoyed your skating last week! Doing that for four hours must have been very exhausting. Or maybe not if you were really having fun..I hope I could do that too one of these days. I tried it before but I\'m not really very good at it. I bet you\'re good at it already.   Thank you for writing a composition. It indeed is a good way to practice your English. I am looking forward for more.    ~T. Kris ^^   Skating >> CORRECT Last week,I went to the Olympic park. >> Last week, I went to the Olympic Park. I went skating for 4 hours. >> I went skating for four hours. And they provided songs. >> The management provided songs. OR: >> The management played some music so I listened while skating. In Friday, I skated alone. >> CORRECT And next day I skated with my best friend Eric. >> The next day, I skated with my best friend Eric. He is not good as me but we enjoyed it. >> He is not as good as I am but we both enjoyed it. OR: >> I skate better than him but he also enjoyed it. And the view of the night is very good. >> The view of the night was also vey nice. OR: >> We also enjoyed the night view. I recommend you to go to skate at night.Almost 6:30 to 8:30. >> I recommend you to skate at night. About 6:30-8:30 in the evening would be perfect.