Skills or hobbies or activities you want to learn.
학생이 쓴 원문
Activities you want to learn : Art Reason:1. It\'s fun to film and express.
Activities you want to learn 2:peacock.
Reason: 1. Because l\'ve done a lot of making since the past.
2.I\'m so proud and happy when I finish making it\'s
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름] [이름]!
I tried my best to rephrase your answers because they weren\'t in sentence form.
I\'m not sure if those are the things you\'re referring to, but I did try to express the context. ^^,)
See you later in class!
__T. Mayleen :)
Activities you want to learn : Art
Reason:1. It\'s fun to film and express.
>>> One activity that I want to try is photography because I like to express myself through pictures.
Activities you want to learn 2:peacock.
Reason: 1. Because l\'ve done a lot of making since the past.
Activities you want to learn 2:peacock.
Reason: 1. Because l\'ve done a lot of making since the past.
>>> I also want to try making a toy peacock, but I have tried it in the past.
2.I\'m so proud and happy when I finish making it\'s
2.I\'m so proud and happy when I finish making it\'s
>>> I feel proud and happy after finishing/making something good.
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