Skin deep!
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes I agree Because other beautiful things are easy to imitate and make them look beautiful. However, the skin deep will not be easy to follow. The skin deep shows different beauty because it can tell how the person usually treats the skin.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Yes I agree Because other beautiful things are easy to imitate and make them look beautiful.
>>> Yes, I agree because other beautiful things are easy to imitate and make them look beautiful.
However, the skin deep will not be easy to follow.
>>> CORRECT!
The skin deep shows different beauty because it can tell how the person usually treats the skin.
>>> Skin deep shows different beauty because it can tell how the person usually treats the skin.
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