Skin problem
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I think that the most terrible skin problem is the pimple. First, it is painful. When there is a pimple on my face, I should wait until the pimple gets yellow or squeeze it. The processes are painful. Second, they make our face ugly. So many people try to remove pimples from their face.
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Hi, Jacob!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille
I think that the most terrible skin problem is the pimple.
>> CORRECT!First, it is painful.
>> CORRECT!When there is a pimple on my face, I should wait until the pimple gets yellow or squeeze it.
>> CORRECT!The processes are painful.
>> CORRECT!Second, they make our face ugly.
>> CORRECT!So many people try to remove pimples from their face.
>> CORRECT!
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