skipping sipping a cup of coffee.
학생이 쓴 원문
I always think about a cup of coffee on my way to work.
It is a my slight pleasure.
But I felt that I had an addiction to coffee at some time.
Because although I am not tired I desired a cup of coffee.
In addition to I can't sleep at night after I drunk more
two cups of coffee.
So I made a cup of ginseng tea that is helpful for my health
instead of coffee.
It's good but I can't satisfy.
Maybe I'll go to the kiosk for a can of coffee that must be a cafe
latte at lunch time.
How can this bittersweet things make people crazy?
강사 첨삭
Hi J! Oh yeah I think you drink roo much coffee. ^^ Anyways there's a decaffeinated coffee available at stores. You can actually buy it and drink it at night and still you will be able to fall asleep. There are also what they call healthy coffee! they're anti-oxidants which helps to keep our body healthy. Try to find them. Take care!!
Lei J
I always think about a cup of coffee on my way to work.
>>I always think about havinga cup of coffee on my way to work.
It is a my slight pleasure.
>>It is my slight pleasure.
But I felt that I had an addiction to coffee at some time.
>>correct
Because although I am not tired I desired a cup of coffee.
>>Because I desire havinga cup of coffee even if I am not tired.
In addition to I can't sleep at night after I drunk more two cups of coffee.
>>In addition, I can't sleep at night after drinking 2 cups of coffee.
So I made a cup of ginseng tea that is helpful for my health instead of coffee.
>>correcy
It's good but I can't satisfy.
>>It's good but I am not satisfied with it.
Maybe I'll go to the kiosk for a can of coffee that must be a cafe latte at lunch time.
>>Maybe I'll go to the kiosk and have caf?latte at lunch time.
How can this bittersweet things make people crazy?
>>correct
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