Sky dyving
학생이 쓴 원문
I have not exprienced much interesting activities, so I want to try Sky dyving because I want to feel flying in the sky.
Thus Sky dyving is a interesting activities for a person.
강사 첨삭
I think this is a dangerous sports dear! :) You are very brave.
I have not exprienced much interesting activities, so I want to try Sky dyving because I want to feel flying in the sky.
>> I have not experienced many interesting activities, so I want to try Sky diving because I would like to feel how it feels to be flying in the sky.
Thus Sky dyving is a interesting activities for a person.
>> Thus Sky diving is an interesting activity for a person.
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