Sleep well
학생이 쓴 원문
When I sick, I need to sleep almoost all day long.
But, I have a lot of schedule as much as I can\'t rest in weekday.
So, if I have common disease such as cold and fever, It\'s a quandary.
For being good feeling, I restain myself and wait weekend.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jady!
Let\'s focus on organization of thoughts.
This can be achieved through constant practice.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
When I sick, I need to sleep almoost all day long.
>> When I am sick, I need to sleep almost all day long.
But, I have a lot of schedule as much as I can\'t rest in weekday.
But, I have a lot of schedule as much as I can\'t rest in weekday.
>> However, I have a busy schedule, so I can\'t rest much on weekdays.
So, if I have common disease such as cold and fever, It\'s a quandary.
So, if I have common disease such as cold and fever, It\'s a quandary.
>> So, if I catch a common illness such as a cold or fever, it\'s a quandary.
For being good feeling, I restain myself and wait weekend
For being good feeling, I restain myself and wait weekend
>> To feel better, I restrain myself and wait for the weekend.
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