sleeping

2011-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

I don't have anything to change because I have enough sleep every day. But suppose that I don't get enough sleep. then I will cancel this phone class. haha. There are some tips for quality sleep. about an hour before going to bed, I make my room dark by turning off main lamp and turning on small lamp. and taking a shower by warm water is very helpful to fall asleep. It is like a sleeping pill.

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear thank you so much for sending in your composition..^^ Its nice to hear that you have enough sleep regardless of your shift, I wish I could have too..:D Anyway, Ill see you later my dear.. T.Cam I don't have anything to change because I have enough sleep every day. >>correct!But suppose that I don't get enough sleep.then I will cancel this phone class. haha. >>what!?hahahaha!!correct!^^There are some tips for quality sleep. >>correct! >>There are some tips to have quality sleep.about an hour before going to bed, I make my room dark by turning off main lamp and turning on small lamp. >>correct!and taking a shower by warm water is very helpful to fall asleep. It is like a sleeping pill. >>correct!  

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·