sleeping
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I don't have anything to change because I have enough sleep every day.
But suppose that I don't get enough sleep.
then I will cancel this phone class. haha.
There are some tips for quality sleep.
about an hour before going to bed, I make my room dark by turning off main lamp and turning on small lamp.
and taking a shower by warm water is very helpful to fall asleep. It is like a sleeping pill.
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear thank you so much for sending in your composition..^^
Its nice to hear that you have enough sleep regardless of your shift, I wish I could have too..:D
Anyway, Ill see you later my dear..
T.Cam
I don't have anything to change because I have enough sleep every day.
>>correct!But suppose that I don't get enough sleep.then I will cancel this phone class. haha.
>>what!?hahahaha!!correct!^^There are some tips for quality sleep.
>>correct!
>>There are some tips to have quality sleep.about an hour before going to bed, I make my room dark by turning off main lamp and turning on small lamp.
>>correct!and taking a shower by warm water is very helpful to fall asleep. It is like a sleeping pill.
>>correct!
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