sleeplessness.
학생이 쓴 원문
good morning. lei. ~
i am really tired today. because i suffered from sleeplessness last night. i spent last weekend so busily. so i was quite tired last night. after prepared for working, i tried to take a sleep. but i was not able to take a sleep. ㅠ ㅠ for sleeping. i drank a hot milk, i streched my body, listened quiet music. but everything didn't work. finally, i was able to sleep at around 4 am. but i awoked at 5 am. it was very hard time. i think the factor of sleeplessness is exhausition. sometimes, too tired caused of sleeplessness.
my exhausiting is come from being busy.
i told you about my weekend plan. from last friday to sunday. i was not able to take enough rest.
i will tell you about it on our class. see you.~
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
Ohhh, I am so sorry to hear that you were not able to have enough sleep last night. I hope that you will finish your work early today so that you can go home early. You can do it girl! AJA!!
Lei :-)
good morning lei~
>>Good morning Lei;
i am really tired today.
>>I am really tired today.
because I suffered from sleeplessness last night I spent last weekend so busily
>>I suffered from sleeplessness last night because last weekend I was so busy.
so I was quite tired last night.
>>I was quite tired last night.
After prepared for working I tried to take a sleep.
>>After I prepared for work I tried to sleep.
but I was not able to take a sleep.
>> But I was not able to sleep.
for sleeping I drank a hot milk, i stretched my body, listened quiet music.
>>To help me sleep I drank hot milk, stretched and listened to quiet music.
But everything didn’t work finally i was able to sleep at around 4 am.
>>I finally went to sleep at around 4 am because everything didn't work.
but I awoke at 5 am it was very hard time.
>>I woke up at 5 am it was very hard for me.
I think the factor of sleeplessness is exhausition
>>I think the factor of sleeplessness is exhaustion.
my exhausiting is come from being busy.
>>I am exhausted because I was so busy
I told you about my weekend plan from last Friday to Sunday.
>>I told you about my weekend plan from Friday until Sunday.
I was not able to take enough rest I will tell you about it on our class see you.
>> I was not able to rest enough I will tell you about it in our class, see you.
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