sleeplessness.

2010-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

good morning. lei. ~ i am really tired today. because i suffered from sleeplessness last night. i spent last weekend so busily. so i was quite tired last night. after prepared for working, i tried to take a sleep. but i was not able to take a sleep. ㅠ ㅠ for sleeping. i drank a hot milk, i streched my body, listened quiet music. but everything didn't work. finally, i was able to sleep at around 4 am. but i awoked at 5 am. it was very hard time. i think the factor of sleeplessness is exhausition. sometimes, too tired caused of sleeplessness. my exhausiting is come from being busy. i told you about my weekend plan. from last friday to sunday. i was not able to take enough rest. i will tell you about it on our class. see you.~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! Ohhh, I am so sorry to hear that you were not able to have enough sleep last night. I hope that you will finish your work early today so that you can go home early. You can do it girl! AJA!! Lei :-) good morning lei~ >>Good morning Lei; i am really tired today. >>I am really tired today. because I suffered from sleeplessness last night I spent last weekend so busily >>I suffered from sleeplessness last night because last weekend I was so busy. so I was quite tired last night. >>I was quite tired last night. After prepared for working I tried to take a sleep. >>After I prepared for work I tried to sleep. but I was not able to take a sleep. >> But I was not able to sleep. for sleeping I drank a hot milk, i stretched my body, listened quiet music. >>To help me sleep I drank hot milk, stretched and listened to quiet music. But everything didn’t work finally i was able to sleep at around 4 am. >>I finally went to sleep at around 4 am because everything didn't work. but I awoke at 5 am it was very hard time. >>I woke up at 5 am it was very hard for me. I think the factor of sleeplessness is exhausition >>I think the factor of sleeplessness is exhaustion. my exhausiting is come from being busy. >>I am exhausted because I was so busy I told you about my weekend plan from last Friday to Sunday.  >>I told you about my weekend plan from Friday until Sunday. I was not able to take enough rest I will tell you about it on our class see you. >> I was not able to rest enough I will tell you about it in our class, see you.  

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