sleepy ,hungry but not bad.

2010-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

T.G.I.Friday~!! You know I was late. I I just did washing my face for going to work. I should have hurried in the morning. It's natural that I didn't have a breakfast. But I thought It's okay. There are some walnut cookies for breakfast in my place. But, as soon as I arrived I only saw cookie wrappers, which were covered cookie by last night. Oh my~ my cookie! my breakfast! Guess Who did it? yes!! It's my dean. Maybe he was very hugry because usally he didn't like cookie. So I just bought a bread and I am eating it now with a cup of coffee. I think life is unforeseeable. and several unexped things do not make our life boring. Thanks to my boss I laughed for a while with a owner of cafeteria.

강사 첨삭

Hi J!! TGIF!!! Today's event is funny. At least your boss made you laugh and smile this time. I agree that life is unpredictable. Sometimes, it's good, sometimes bad. I hope you'll have energy for today's work. Cheer up okay!! Have a great weekend!!! Have fun with your picnic tomorrow. Lei J   T.G.I.Friday~!!>>correctyou know I was late.>>correctI just did washing my face for going to work.>>I just finished washing my face and prepare for work.I should have hurried in the morning.>>correctIt's natural that I didn't have a breakfast. >>It's normal that I didn't have a breakfast. But I thought its okay.>>correctthere are some walnut cookies for breakfast in my place.>>correctbut, as soon as I arrived I only saw cookie wrappers, which were covered cookie by last night.>> but, as soon as I arrived I just saw cookie wrappers. Oh my~ my cookies! My breakfast!>>correctGuess Who did it? yes!! It's my dean.>>Guess who ate it? Yes, it was my dean!!!!Maybe he was very hugry because usally he didn't like cookie.>>Maybe he was really hungry because usually he doesn't like eating my cookies.So I just bought a bread and I am eating it now with a cup of coffee.>>correctI think life is unforeseeable. >>correct >>I think life is unpredictable. and several unexped things do not make our life boring >>And several unexpected things doesn't make our life boring.>>And several unexpected things make our life exciting.Thanks to my boss I laughed for a while with a owner of cafeteria. >> Thanks to my boss I laughed for a while with the cafeteria owner.

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