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2014-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hi again Debby :) Yup, writing is also a way to improve my English skill. Thanks to that I practiced every week like this, I really feel that my writing skill is improved. Of course I feel that the other skills are also improved. I'm really excited because the summer vacation isn't far. But why do the time flow slowly? It's Tuesday yet. Come on! haha Take care~ :D <Essay> I think French is also widely used. It's not used as widely as English. But it's designated as a common language by UN. So many Europe countries use French to communicate each other. This is why I'm learning French as well.

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Bonjour Monsiour [이름]^^ Thank you for sending this today.^^ I\'m glad that you fell your improvement. It\'s one thing that puts a smile on your face and another thing that would boost your confidence. Skills n English are sometimes improved gradually. It takes time and especially grammar it\'s a process. It never stops and the best way is to familiarize rather than memorize. Develop an instinct to know if you made a mistake and make a habit of turning back and correcting yourself on your own. ^^ Be careful with the noun form and the adjective form of a word. Example is Europe as the country [noun] and European [adjective/noun] as a word to describe the aspects of the country. It might mean the people or it\'s paired with nouns like European culture, Euoropean food etc. Keep up studying English and French. Good luck^^ Have a great day ahead ^^ ^^T.Debby^^ Here are my corrrections for you: Hi again Debby :)>> Hello again Debby^^Yup, writing is also a way to improve my English skill. >> CORRECT OR> You bet! I can improve my skills with writing. Thanks to that I practiced every week like this, I really feel that my writing skill is improved. >> I\'m thankful that I practice every week like this, I really feel that my writing skill has improved. Of course I feel that the other skills are also improved.>> CORRECT OR> My improvement includes my other skills too.^^I\'m really excited because the summer vacation isn\'t far. >> CORRECT OR> I\'m looking forward for the summer vacation. But why do the time flow slowly? >> But why does the time flow slowly? It\'s Tuesday yet. Come on! haha>> CORRECT OR> It\'s just Tuesday! How come?^^Take care~ :D >> CORRECT OR> Be careful.^^<Essay>I think French is also widely used. >> CORRECT OR> For me, French is also most spoken. It\'s not used as widely as English. >> CORRECT OR> It\'s not as popular as English. But it\'s designated as a common language by UN. >> CORRECT OR> But according to United Nations it\'s one of the common languages.  So many Europe countries use French to communicate each other. This is why I\'m learning French as well. >> So many European countries use French to communicate with each other. This is why I\'m learning French as well.

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