small car accident

2017-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Megan

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Yesterday, when I drove my car to home, I suddenly had a car accident. Fortunately, me and my wife weren't hurted, and my car also got a little scratches on the door. I felt really embarrassed but my wife had a next schedules, we just exchanged our phone number each other and promised to call later. First of all, I called to ask advice of my friend who works at a car insurance company. I described to him about the circumstances of car accident. I was just driving straight in right lane, and when I reached at intersaction, a car from the side street scratched my back door of the right side. it seems like that other car owner's fault was heavier than me. because my car was going on straight and I already passed the side street and afterwards he rushed into my car. I felt relieved and dealt car accident with insurance.

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름],


 I was quite upset to hear of your recent accident. In fact, the news was very disconcerting to me. I am confident, nonetheless, that your strength and vigor will lead to a quick recovery. 


~Teacher Megan~


HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS:

Yesterday, when I drove my car to home, I suddenly had a car accident.

>>> Yesterday, while driving home, I had a car accident.


Fortunately, me and my wife weren\'t hurted, and my car also got a little scratches on the door.

>>> Fortunately, me and my wife weren\'t hurt, and my car got a little scratches on it\'s door.


I felt really embarrassed but my wife had a next schedules, we just exchanged our phone number each other and promised to call later.

>>> I felt really embarrassed but my wife had a next appointment, we just exchanged our phone numbers and promised to call each other later.


First of all, I called to ask advice of my friend who works at a car insurance company.

>>> First of all, I called to ask the advice of my friend who works at a car insurance company.


I described to him about the circumstances of car accident.

>>> Correct.


 I was just driving straight in right lane, and when I reached at intersaction, a car from the side street scratched my back door of the right side.

>>>  I was driving straight in a right lane, and when I reached the intersection, a car from the side street scratched my back door on the right.


it seems like that other car owner\'s fault was heavier than me.

>>> Correct.


because my car was going on straight and I already passed the side street and afterwards he rushed into my car.

>>> because my car was going straight and I already passed by the side street and afterwards he rushed into my car.


I felt relieved and dealt car accident with insurance.

>>> Correct.

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