small car accident
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear [이름],
I was quite upset to hear of your recent accident. In fact, the news was very disconcerting to me. I am confident, nonetheless, that your strength and vigor will lead to a quick recovery.
~Teacher Megan~
HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS:
Yesterday, when I drove my car to home, I suddenly had a car accident.
>>> Yesterday, while driving home, I had a car accident.
Fortunately, me and my wife weren\'t hurted, and my car also got a little scratches on the door.
>>> Fortunately, me and my wife weren\'t hurt, and my car got a little scratches on it\'s door.
I felt really embarrassed but my wife had a next schedules, we just exchanged our phone number each other and promised to call later.
>>> I felt really embarrassed but my wife had a next appointment, we just exchanged our phone numbers and promised to call each other later.
First of all, I called to ask advice of my friend who works at a car insurance company.
>>> First of all, I called to ask the advice of my friend who works at a car insurance company.
I described to him about the circumstances of car accident.
>>> Correct.
I was just driving straight in right lane, and when I reached at intersaction, a car from the side street scratched my back door of the right side.
>>> I was driving straight in a right lane, and when I reached the intersection, a car from the side street scratched my back door on the right.
it seems like that other car owner\'s fault was heavier than me.
>>> Correct.
because my car was going on straight and I already passed the side street and afterwards he rushed into my car.
>>> because my car was going straight and I already passed by the side street and afterwards he rushed into my car.
I felt relieved and dealt car accident with insurance.
>>> Correct.
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