Small Company? or Large company?
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Many Korean believe that it is much better to work at a large company compared to a small one. I agree with this because a large company has a lot of fringe benefits and pays much money for them. So people tend to prefer to go to a large company not considering thier interests. I know all of things a large company gives are very important to get a job and work. However, I think people should find their interests first. It's the most important thing in working place. For example, I saw many people who suffer from working in a large company. So they quit the job easily. As a result, I would like to say that you should find yourself first!
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Thanks for another wonderful compo. I can say that I really commend your style in writing and in coming up with a well organized essay about something. Same as usual, I just checked the grammar and structure part. I know you are getting better and probably trying to work on this part, so keep it up! Practice is really essential. Have a great day! ^^
XOXO, Jenny
Many Korean believe that it is much better to work at a large company compared to a small one.
>> Many Koreans believe that it is much better to work at a large company compared to a small one.
>> Many Koreans believe that it is much better to work in a large company that in a small one.
I agree with this because a large company has a lot of fringe benefits and pays much money for them.
>> I agree with this because a large company has a lot of fringe benefits and pays much money to them.
>>I agree with this because a large company gives a lot of fringe benefits and a higher salary to them.
So people tend to prefer to go to a large company not considering thier interests.
>> So people prefer to work in a large company considering their interests.
I know all of things a large company gives are very important to get a job and work.
>>I know that all of the things a large company gives are very important aspects in job and work.
However, I think people should find their interests first. It's the most important thing in working place.
>> However, I think people should consider their interests first. It is the most important thing in the workplace.
For example, I saw many people who suffer from working in a large company. So they quit the job easily.
>> For example, I saw many people who suffered from working in large company so they quit their jobs easily.
As a result, I would like to say that you should find yourself first!
>> Because of this, I would like to say that one should contemplate on himself first before applying for a job.
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