Smartphone

2023-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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To be honest, since I don\'t have enough experiences to fix things, I don\'t know well about relating tools. However, The thing that I can say apparently is I always use smartphone whenever I face to unknown situations. I tend to find some ways by search engines and enter some keywords to youtube. Smartphone is the best gadget to everyone as it can give people a various of experiences like entertainment, information, communication.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your homework, Yu [이름]!

You\'re doing great!

-Hanna ^^

To be honest, since I don\'t have enough experiences to fix things, I don\'t know well about relating tools.

>>To be honest, my experience in fixing things is limited, and my knowledge of related tools is not extensive.
However, The thing that I can say apparently is I always use smartphone whenever I face to unknown situations.

>>However, one tool that I consistently rely on is my smartphone. 
I tend to find some ways by search engines and enter some keywords to youtube.

>>I tend to find some ways by search engines and enter some keywords on Youtube.
Smartphone is the best gadget to everyone as it can give people a various of experiences like entertainment, information, communication.

>>Smartphone is the best gadget for everyone as it can give people various experiences like entertainment, information and communication.

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